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Deck of Fools Page 59

I Was Just At The Gate

Wall O’ Text. Literally.

2 Responses to “I Was Just At The Gate”

  1. Lisa says:

    So I was wrong. Long story to wake up to in the middle of the night for Diane. So much for sleep.

    • deckoffools deckoffools says:

      Eh, nothing wrong with guessing wrong. I think cliffhangers have a place in storytelling, but it didn’t feel right to me to have one here. I wanted the first chapter to sort of set the stage for the rest of the story, introduce our key players, a few of their motivations and personality traits, bits of history and world building. Stuff like that yah? Give a good solid launching point for all the future events to springboard off, and some anchors to extend a flashback or two.

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